A very sad day

am learning to put full stop in the right place and capital letter at the start of the sentence

In the holiday we had to go to the hospital to see my Nanny Libby it was sad because my nanny Libby past away. Because she was sick the next day we went to Whangarei to choose a coffin and get her dressed.After that we went to the Otiria marae.We took her in the marae there were lots of people and then we shook lots of people's hands After that we went outside. And play hide and seek it was fun we played that for the rest of the day. Until dark we went in  the marae and we played on the ipad. After that we went to bed the next day on Tuesday we  buried her. When the lid was closed I cried.