Thursday, March 30, 2017
My persuasive writing. I am learning to check my own work and make it make sense.
I do not think we should take all of our rubbish to the dump because we could use it for stuff. Beer glass can be turned into sand and sand turns into glass. You can use car metal cardboard and wood. Metal can make stuff move and metal can be a car frame. Wood can be for a house and it can be for a go cart. You can use wood for a seat. Cardboard you can use this for a ramp for toy cars. You can use plastic you can use them for containers. So i do not think we should take all of our rubbish to the dump.
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Hi there, my name is Shabeera and I am a student in Hauraki at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like you persuasive writing. It made me think of “ What it would be like if you did not take out rubbish to the dump. Have you thought about littering because littering is really bad for the environment :) If you would like to see my learning, my blog is ------------> http://wpsshabeeraa.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi Shabeera,
ReplyDeleteIt Seddon thank you for your nice feedback I did think about littering and I do not litter. Thanks see ya later.