My unedited Waitangi recount

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We went to waitangi on friday. We all lined up to hop in the bus and then we went to waitangi.

And then when we got there we saw the wakas after the wakas we went to the museum there were old guns in the museum and there were touch screens and a green stone and there were pictures next we went to the flag staff and we ate lunch after lunch after we went in to the treaty house and after the house we went in to the marie and then we went for a swim and after a swim we went back to school.

My writing goals are:

• Add more detail to my ideas (describe what I thought, felt and saw)
• Understand where full stops should go and always begin sentences with capital letter.